Index: trunk/packages/invirt-web/code/main.py
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--- trunk/packages/invirt-web/code/main.py	(revision 1706)
+++ trunk/packages/invirt-web/code/main.py	(revision 1707)
@@ -432,10 +432,11 @@
 ParaVM.  You can access the resulting system by logging into the <a
 href="help?simple=true&subject=ParaVM+Console">serial console server</a>
-with your Kerberos tickets; there is no root password and sshd will
+with your Kerberos tickets; there is no root password so sshd will
 refuse login.</p>
 
-<p>Under the covers the autoinstaller uses our own patched version of
-xen-create-image, which is a tool based on debootstrap.  If you're
-quick in logging into the serial console, you can see it running.
+<p>Under the covers, the autoinstaller uses our own patched version of
+xen-create-image, which is a tool based on debootstrap.  If you log
+into the serial console while the install is running, you can watch
+it.
 """,
                     'ParaVM Console': """