Changeset 1707 for trunk

Timestamp:

Nov 17, 2008, 1:37:54 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

broder

Message:

Tweak the language a bit

File:

• trunk/packages/invirt-web/code/main.py (modified) (1 diff)

trunk/packages/invirt-web/code/main.py

@@ -432 +432 @@
 ParaVM.  You can access the resulting system by logging into the <a
 href="help?simple=true&subject=ParaVM+Console">serial console server</a>
-with your Kerberos tickets; there is no root password and sshd will
+with your Kerberos tickets; there is no root password so sshd will
 refuse login.</p>
 
-<p>Under the covers the autoinstaller uses our own patched version of
-xen-create-image, which is a tool based on debootstrap.  If you're
-quick in logging into the serial console, you can see it running.
+<p>Under the covers, the autoinstaller uses our own patched version of
+xen-create-image, which is a tool based on debootstrap.  If you log
+into the serial console while the install is running, you can watch
+it.
 """,
                     'ParaVM Console': """